Main Task- Dairy Entry 2

In todays lesson we finished writing our first draft of our script, we then read them to the class and got some feed back. We then started to adjust our script for our second drafts but adding more conventional things of film noir to our dialogue such as the ltime it was set in 1930-40s and American. Me and Lauren researched American slang and added some into our dialogue to make it more conventional. We also looked at a acting website to hire some actors bs think we will be using the we site to get actors for some of our main characters as they meet the points the we need for them. We have not yet finished our second draft but it is almost done with the adjustments in place.